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Wednesday, June 3, 2020

Christmas Trouble

                     Christmas Trouble
    Chapter 1                       

It was a wonderful night  for all kids christmas eve
we stay up late  and try see santa when I was going to
sleep on the couch and I put out a christmas tooth paste
and a christmas toothbrush and a note with one very
crunchy cookie and a carrot with an apple or two with
a hot cup of coffee.

To santa merry christmas.
I  thought you would have a
toothache,by the time you finished
eating all the cookies. I hope that
you  have a great Christmas.
lots of delicious cookies,
happy Christmas wishes and an
apple for every Reindeer,
Merry christmas!!!!! 
  <3kate and kasey<3 








Now time for bed I didn’t want to
sleep on the couch in case I get put in the naughty lis
t so I went up to my bedroom I was so tired and it was
  7:00 PM I think it’s because santa wants to come to my
house first so i got to  bed and bam I saw something red
oh no santa has crashed into my room I jumped and
grabbed Rudolph by a hug and saw all the other reindeer
run off but not Rudolph and Cupid santa had Cupid
and I had Rudolph oh my sister was in my room with bltzen
oh i'm sorry oh kate you are on the naughty list but not
anymore I thought you were going to sleep on the couch
no I didn't want to be put on the naughty list so I didn't
that's ok  your on the nice list because you and your sister
saved some of my Reindeer thank you so much do you
want to go ask your parents if you can come yep “kacey
do you want to go” yep but can i Rise Blitzen ok  YAY
go ahead wish she jumped she couldn't get up so i said
hop on zmy bed ok can you go to my mum and dad can
me and kate go with santa only if we can come wait why
are you on Blitzen santa let me ok but be very quiet
there's a reindeer sleeping by our tree prancer his ears
twitched then he stood mum yes jump on but
prancer can mum get a rid  if she can bend down in
front of her next thing he’s bent down in front of her she
climbs up and what about me yo prancer can
I get a ride prancer gives him a slight nod so he hops on.
oh prancer he was sleeping under our tree let's go give
some presents but. But what about the other Reindeer
we will find and then we will  NO! present fine we sigh.



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                  Chapiar 2

                  The split up

I have an Idea what we split up we will go find the Reindeer
and you go deliver the presents yes let's do this kate you go
with santa yep kacey you come with us but i want to go with

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Caily, you are a very confident writer, well done! I loved the idea of Santa crashing into your room. I can't wait to see what will happen in chapter 2, keep up the great work.

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