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Tuesday, July 28, 2020

Deep Dark Cave😀

me and Tiffany but i call her Tiff. We where walking in a dark cave.(Tiff)"What is that up ahead?" 
(Me)"I don't know let go look"
(Tiff)"are you sure that's a good idea"
(Me)"yes we just wont touch it"
(Tiff)"ya but i know you so i know you will touch it"
"you will stop me"
(Tiff)"I will try "

"(i will touch it when you are not looking hehe)"
(Tiff)"what did you say"
"nothing"
(Tiff)"I'm pretty sure you said something"
"I DID'T SAY NOTHING"
(Tiff)"okay okay calm down"
"but i did't say nothing''
(Tiff)"Okay i believe you"
"you better"
(Tiff)"what's that up ahead"
"just a statue of a monster not like it will do anything" 
(Tiff)"But in the movies"
"THE MOVIES ARE FAKE" 
"(Tiff) but if it happens you have to say I'm all ways right"
"Fine 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Caily, I love your use of speech marks, it makes your writing a lot easier to read. I wonder what you could see up ahead in the cave? Great writing.

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